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Book editor

Robert Murray

Books edited: fiction in every genre, non-fiction of every type, biography and memoir.

  • 35+years editing professionally
  • 240+books edited by Robert and EditFast since 1998
  • 3publishers: Harcourt, Prentice Hall and Chartwell

Describe your book

About

Editing for more than 35 years

Professional editor for more than 35 years. Edited novels, biographies and screenplays for publication for the publishers Harcourt, Prentice Hall and Chartwell. Also edited scientific papers published in Nature, technical manuals, and construction specifications for the Three Gorges Dam.

Studied English literature at the University of British Columbia (BA Honours) and the University of Victoria (MA studies). Thesis: the creation of Canadian mythology through fiction.

What gets edited

Every kind of book

Fiction
Novels and short stories in every genre, including mystery, suspense, spy, horror, science fiction, fantasy, romance and historical fiction.
Non-fiction
All types, including narrative non-fiction, history, business, self-help, how-to and textbooks.
Biography and memoir
Biographies, memoirs and family histories.
Screenplays
Scripts for film and television.
Comics, manga and graphic novels
Original and translated scripts and lettered pages, for all ages through adult.
Translated books
English translated from another language, edited so it reads as natural English. Ten years living and working in Japan; running a translation company since 1998.
Children's books
Picture books and middle-grade books.
Photo and travel books
Text for photo books and travel books.
Educational books
Textbooks and teaching materials from elementary school to university, for Harcourt and Prentice Hall.
Services

Services

  1. Manuscript assessment

    A read of the whole book and a written report on what works and what to fix.

    How it works, with a sample

  2. Structural editing

    Plot, pacing, structure, character and argument.

    How it works, with a sample

  3. Copy editing

    Sentence-level clarity, consistency and style, to Chicago Manual of Style.

    How it works, with a sample

  4. Proofreading

    The final check before publication.

    How it works, with a sample

Books

Books edited

Robert and EditFast have edited more than 240 books since 1998. A selection:

Fiction 29

  • 2025The Magi-scope, by Peter Hoey · historical novel
  • 2022Petitions, by Paul Jannuzzi · novel
  • 2021And Cool My Tongue, by Glenn MacDonald · Christian novel
  • 2021The Ninth Precept, by Francis McDonald · novel
  • 2019Zombie Dreams · novel
  • 2019The Last Deal · detective novel
  • 2018The California Killing Field
  • 2017Escape, by Gabriela Voiculescu · novel
  • 2017Dragon's Breath · novel
  • 2016Knotweeds: Life in the Cracks · novel
  • 2016Cage's Crew, by Martin Archer · novel
  • 2016Epic Archer Saga, by Martin Archer · novel series
  • 2015On Our Own, by Mark Dowd · novel
  • 2015Eagles Claw, by R.P. Wollbaum · novel
  • 2015Autum's Grey and Autum's Grey 2 · novels
  • 2015Noggle · young adult novel
  • 2015Threads of the Departed: Strands, by Mary Aiello · historical mystery
  • 2013Blowfish, by Van Scott Fulton · spy thriller
  • 2013Saltwater Kisses · novel
  • 2011World of Grayham, Book One · fantasy novel
  • 2010The Brotherhood Lynching Society, by Willie Richardson
  • 2010A Tale of Youth and Sorrow, by Michael Logarta · young adult novel
  • 2010Full Circle, by Denise Hengst · novel
  • 2009Copadrama: A Brazilian Tragicomedy, by Isabela Martins · novel translated from Portuguese
  • 2009God's Only Daughter, by Damon Galeassi · novel
  • 2009Eclipse and The Global Warming Mega-affect, by Willie Richardson · novel
  • 2009Life Interrupted, by Francesca Grillo · fiction
  • 2009First Love, by Violet Niggl · fiction
  • 2009It's My Ball, by Allyn Coover

Memoir and biography 11

  • 2018Scavenger · memoir
  • 2018My 5 Days in Heaven, by Megan Brown · memoir
  • 2018The Loneliest Road, by Shaun Cyr · travel memoir
  • 2016Maman, by Moris Niknam · memoir of the author's mother
  • 2015Sempre avanti! La storia della mia vita · memoir
  • 2015The Remains of My Day · memoir
  • 2014The Life and Times of E-7 · family memoir
  • 2013Out of the Shadows, by Nina Perez Reed · memoir
  • 2013Khawadja Khartoum · autobiography
  • 2010Manitoba Grey Bellies, by Eric Walthall · memoir
  • 2010The Boy From Bterram, by Frances Mourani · biography

Non-fiction 25

  • 2022Data Analytics in the Public Sector, by Betty Ann M. Turpin
  • 2021Confessions of a Psycho-therapist, by Steve Long
  • 2021Living a Bigger Life, by Tammy Wark
  • 2020Democratic Socialism and Education in Jamaica
  • 2019To Thine Own Health Be True
  • 2018Many Things Most Christians Do Not Know
  • 2018MAN-ifestation, by Cord Proctor
  • 2018Happy in a Sad World, by Sharon D. Smith
  • 2018Woman Up: Nice Girls Finish Last, by Athena Woodford
  • 2017Redefining a Life
  • 2017Reflections on Persian Grammar
  • 2016Developments in Persian · linguistics
  • 2016Social Quotient, by Donald Macfarlane
  • 2015Civility Rules!
  • 2015Syntax-Phonology Interface in Chinese Dialects · linguistics
  • 2015Polish Campaign 1939 · military history
  • 2013Financial Analysis for Technology Managers
  • 2012Call of the Cosmic Wild · science
  • 2010Fish on the Roof, by Nobuyoshi Ozaki · US–Japan relations
  • 2010Spice to the Body, by Trizann Buultjens
  • 2010No Limits Prescription for Life, by Rabia D'Andrade
  • 2009Cancer from A to Z, by Becky King · health
  • 2009Live the Life You Dreamed, by Ardiana Cohn · self-help
  • 2009Daily Meditations, by Wendell Hodgson
  • 2009B.P.D. Book, by Helen Albanese · psychology

Children's books 4

  • 2024ChewBarka and Mike, by Diane Totland
  • 2021A Very Strange Year, Prairie Pals, Party at the Zoo and Bark Oink Moo, by Diane Totland
  • 2015The Rainbow Forest · middle-grade novel in verse
  • 2012Monster in My Shoe · picture book

Photo and travel books 2

  • 2026Where the Wild Still Breathes, by Richard Bolt
  • 2024A Journey Home, by Richard Bolt

Robert and the EditFast team also edited 1,135 other documents from 2008 to 2020. See the documents edited.

Record

Why authors choose this service

  • 35+ years editing professionally
  • 240+ books edited by Robert and EditFast since 1998
  • 10,000+ projects edited and delivered, including novels, biographies and textbooks
  • Publishers: Harcourt, Prentice Hall and Chartwell
  • Magazines: Today, Chatelaine and Off Road Trucking
  • Journals: Nature, The Scientist, Canadian Journal of Chemistry and Journal of Climate
  • BA (Honours) English, University of British Columbia, with an emphasis on Canadian fiction, Milton, Shakespeare, the British and American novel, and critical theory
  • MA studies in English, University of Victoria. Thesis: The Creation of Canadian Mythology Through Fiction
  • Chicago Manual of Style, the standard for book publishing
  • 4,000+ editors and writers managed at EditFast
References

What people say

He is a very fine writer and speaker… he drew upon his life experience and his wide reading in literature and criticism. Therefore, without reservation, I recommend that you employ him.

Prof. Fred E. Stockholder, Department of English, University of British Columbia

Mr. Murray performed solidly in my course in the 18th century novel. He is a thoughtful, articulate and personable young man… I recommend him most highly.

Prof. David L. Evans, Department of English, University of British Columbia

As a university researcher and professor for over 35 years, I have submitted more than 400 articles to various scientific journals… I have contacted more than 50 specialists and Mr. Murray is one of the top specialists among them. Robert has never failed to accomplish my requests on time and with perfection.

Prof. Takayuki Shibamoto, University of California, Davis

His exceptional work in the arena of professional writing, editing, and proofreading exceeded my personal and professional expectations… I trust him, and I have great respect for his editing and writing skills.

Russell Homan, formerly GE Applied Engineering Research & Development Laboratories

Bob has edited and proofread numerous medical and clinical documents, reports and journal articles with professionalism at all times. His skills are unsurpassed… his attention to detail is second to none.

Dr. Ivan Boyadjov, Clinician, Vancouver Island Health Authority

Robert is a talented man with an easygoing manner that belies the power behind his creativity and resourcefulness.

Satchiko Kobori, Director, Steinbeis Japan Inc., Tokyo
Background

Other work

Cultural and charitable organizations

  • Nelson Mandela Foundation, South Africa — pro bono promotional and awareness materials
  • DuSable Museum of African American History, Chicago — educational materials
  • World Food Programme (WFP) — proposals and study documents for a malaria prevention programme

Career

  • 1998–presentFounder and Editor in Chief, EditFast and TranslationHelp
  • 2010–presentFounder, Sunshine Coast Cottage Watch and Sunshine Coast Boat Watch, Sunshine Coast, BC
  • 2006–2011Search Quality Rater, Google, through a contracted rating vendor
  • 1999–2002Director, Language Consulting, IBM Japan / Lotus Japan, Tokyo
  • 1997–2000Founder, 99 Red Balloons Japan, Tokyo, sold at a profit after three years
  • 1992–1997English technical and marketing consultant, NKK (now JFE Steel), Japan
  • Early 1990sBranch manager, Household Trust, Richmond, BC
  • 1978–80, 1985–86Counsellor and shift supervisor, Cariboo Action Training Society, Prince George, BC
  • EarlierHighway surveyor on the Dempster Highway in the Arctic, by dog sled and Twin Otter

Other clients included Google, IBM, Kodak, Nokia, Ericsson, Ford, Caterpillar, Cartier, Kraft Foods, Heinz, Costco, Massachusetts General Hospital, Vancouver General Hospital, the United Nations and the governments of Canada, the United States and China.

Outside work

Away from the desk

Sea kayak expert, open-water diver, hiker, cyclist and amateur astronomer.

Sites

Other TilyD Enterprises Ltd. sites

  • editfast.comEditing and proofreading, since 1998
  • EditorVerified.comQuality-control standards for AI-written content: checklists, scoring rubrics, an audit tool and human editorial review
  • editingtests.comTests for editors
  • writertesting.comTests for writers
  • IndustryTests.comWorking-knowledge tests for jobs in thousands of industries, checked by industry experts
  • IndustryTesting.caThe Canadian version of IndustryTests.com, with Canadian spelling, prices and rules
  • secretcovepress.comIndependent publisher on the Sunshine Coast of British Columbia
  • theorangeraven.comThe Legend of the Orange Raven, a historical novel in thirty chapters, with the history of ravens and people behind it
  • thelasthypothesis.comOn the question of why there is anything at all
  • contentedmanager.comContent strategy for business owners
  • mycottagewatch.comScheduled, photographed property checks for cottages and homes while the owners are away
  • tilyd.comThe company behind EditFast and its sister sites
  • adbubbles.comSmall, low-cost ads that appear when a reader points at a keyword
  • camphostjobs.comPaid and volunteer campground host jobs in parks and campgrounds across Canada and the US
  • EverySeniorBenefits.comGuides to US benefits for seniors, including Social Security, SSI, Medicare and Extra Help, with a benefits check
  • oasguide.caStep-by-step guides and calculators for Canada's public pensions: OAS, GIS and CPP, including the clawback, deferral and appeals
  • marketplacetips.comHelp for people who sell on online marketplaces
  • offgridmanuals.comGuides to living off-grid in Canada: provincial rules, buying rural land and sizing power systems for Canadian winters
  • gvls.comGlobal Village Language Services
  • vuhi.ca
  • vuyu.ca
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